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Post #1 · Posted at 2016-06-18 10:33:51pm 7.9 years ago

Offline MavWil
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Nintendo Network ID: electricrainfallGame Center Nickname: 15mavlol
"8 month hiatus break!"
So darkstorm091 had the idea of a workshop thread for people's music, and personally I think that's an excellent idea. Idea

Feel free to post your music here for feedback, criticism and opinions, to help improve your work!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DGN1k3XXYAEGAJJ.jpg

Post #2 · Posted at 2016-06-19 03:06:15am 7.9 years ago

Offline midone
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https://soundcloud.com/william-hunteman-jr/flowey-remix-v1 this is something i've worked on a little

Post #3 · Posted at 2016-06-21 10:19:49pm 7.9 years ago

Offline MavWil
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Nintendo Network ID: electricrainfallGame Center Nickname: 15mavlol
"8 month hiatus break!"
https://instaud.io/reF thing i made in about an hour tonight. Dunno if this will become a Z4U submission or not.
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DGN1k3XXYAEGAJJ.jpg

Post #4 · Posted at 2016-06-21 11:59:24pm 7.9 years ago

Offline midone
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Hmm... It sounds really nice, but i think the melody could maybe use a little more variation when it starts, and the percussion in the beginning sounds a little too bit-crushed in my opinion. Other than that, pretty nice!

Post #5 · Posted at 2016-06-23 04:06:35am 7.9 years ago

Offline 5l1n65h07
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"OH SHE'S UP TAE SPEED NOW BOIS"
https://soundcloud.com/5l1n65h07/hold my latest work
5l1-STEP Series:
https://i.imgur.com/WU07Aya.pnghttps://i.imgur.com/cpXKqJA.png

Post #6 · Posted at 2016-06-23 04:11:40am 7.9 years ago

Offline midone
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Sounds really cool, am i hearing a Max 300 sample in there somewhere? You should consider submitting it to Z4U!

Post #7 · Posted at 2016-06-23 04:21:50am 7.9 years ago

Offline 5l1n65h07
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"OH SHE'S UP TAE SPEED NOW BOIS"
Quote: midone
Sounds really cool, am i hearing a Max 300 sample in there somewhere? You should consider submitting it to Z4U!

Yes, I used a Max 300 sample in the piece.

Also, thanks for your critique. I'll keep that in mind!
5l1-STEP Series:
https://i.imgur.com/WU07Aya.pnghttps://i.imgur.com/cpXKqJA.png

Post #8 · Posted at 2016-06-23 04:27:53am 7.9 years ago

Offline midone
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i might make resources for music like drum kit noises or something, what do you guys think?

Post #9 · Posted at 2016-06-24 10:42:35am 7.9 years ago

Offline Densetsu.EXE
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"SOUND VOLTEX -BOOTH-"
I made this last year for the first Z-I-M project but didn't quite make the deadline, so I'm considering putting it into this next one:
https://instaud.io/rs8
https://i.imgur.com/1zjrrWb.png
Download here (mp3, 320kbps): (continuous mix) | (separate tracks)

Post #10 · Posted at 2016-06-25 12:57:44am 7.9 years ago

Offline midone
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You should! It sounds nice!

Post #11 · Posted at 2016-08-31 06:41:54am 7.7 years ago

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"suffering from success"
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/201480223680757760/220420446540136448/untitled4.wav
i don't have a title for it. i don't even know if the link works. but it's the first real project i've worked on since No Cure's release, and i just wanna get some opinions on it.

Post #12 · Posted at 2016-09-02 03:33:04am 7.7 years ago

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It sounds nice! Kind of reminds me of bemani menu music!

Post #13 · Posted at 2016-09-03 03:06:44am 7.7 years ago

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"now led_light for short"
https://soundcloud.com/liberalotaku/moonlight-reflection

So I finally made something that doesn't sound like a complete mess. It's a Touhou remix too, although it took me a while to figure out the entire chord progression of the song (at least I think I did).
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Post #14 · Posted at 2016-09-03 06:49:19am 7.7 years ago

Offline Densetsu.EXE
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"SOUND VOLTEX -BOOTH-"
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https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/201480223680757760/220420446540136448/untitled4.wav
i don't have a title for it. i don't even know if the link works. but it's the first real project i've worked on since No Cure's release, and i just wanna get some opinions on it.

I'm not sure what the intent of this is, but it does sound like it's a title screen for a game. Can definitely get behind the arps, which sound great.

Quote: ledgam3r1279
https://soundcloud.com/liberalotaku/moonlight-reflection

So I finally made something that doesn't sound like a complete mess. It's a Touhou remix too, although it took me a while to figure out the entire chord progression of the song (at least I think I did).

So you intended to submit this for Diverse System's thE.works but didn't make the deadline? Considering you were trying to go for a chill mood as with the album, I got a vibe similar to Rin's "House set of _____" set of Touhou albums and that makes it good in my book.
https://i.imgur.com/1zjrrWb.png
Download here (mp3, 320kbps): (continuous mix) | (separate tracks)

Post #15 · Posted at 2016-09-10 05:40:58pm 7.7 years ago

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"suffering from success"
https://soundcloud.com/anonywolf/katherine-calling-early-demo
Made a quick demo of a song I'm writing about my previous girlfriend. Still needs a second verse. Also needs a definitive bridge. LMK your opinions please.
Also, I'm aware of the shaky delivery. Please be nice.

Post #16 · Posted at 2016-09-15 02:19:52am 7.7 years ago

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Nice job, Anonywolf. Really all i can say that needs improvement is your vocal volume. other than that, really good!

Post #17 · Posted at 2016-09-16 01:26:49am 7.7 years ago

Offline darkanine
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"bing bong"
https://soundcloud.com/derrix-106459298/parfait-sample

Only a sample, but you can still give me feedback
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Post #18 · Posted at 2016-09-16 08:22:23pm 7.7 years ago

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So, I FINALLY got a chance to use VocalWriter for something big~! Me and my buddy SZ64saulius collaborated on "Sweet Candy Party", an original happy hardcore track featuring the real voice of Alt! I wrote the lyrics and did the VocalWriter vocals, while SZ64saulius did the rest of the song. What do y'all think?
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Post #19 · Posted at 2016-09-17 07:03:56pm 7.7 years ago

Offline Quickman
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"five minute white boy challenge"
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Approximately nobody asked for this song to be included. Least popular decision by the Japanese since Nintendo released the Wii U.
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Post #20 · Posted at 2016-09-18 02:24:30pm 7.7 years ago

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"SOUND VOLTEX -BOOTH-"
Quote: 01angel
So, I FINALLY got a chance to use VocalWriter for something big~! Me and my buddy SZ64saulius collaborated on "Sweet Candy Party", an original happy hardcore track featuring the real voice of Alt! I wrote the lyrics and did the VocalWriter vocals, while SZ64saulius did the rest of the song. What do y'all think?

The balance between music and vocals needs addressing here:
(0:19-0:32) The piano kind of takes away from the ALT vocal; I suggest removing that entirely from this section but I'm not sure if this will improve it, try going for a balance between instruments and the vocal here.
(1:20 onwards) The vocals really begin to clash with the music here, but this is likely a sync problem, as the vocals start a little too early and stumble over the instrumental. I'm not sure if the vocal track is even the same BPM as the instrumental, as the vocal delivery seems too fast here.

Just a few things that stood out from the first listen. Music production takes a lot of practice and experimentation to get better, so keep producing. This goes double especially since it looks like you can actually do things with the ALT vocal, which might come in handy with later productions.
https://i.imgur.com/1zjrrWb.png
Download here (mp3, 320kbps): (continuous mix) | (separate tracks)
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