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I couldn't think of any other place to put these stories on the site here so I'm going to create a new thread. This is just a little intro to my series. The first one started out when I got the idea of trying to see how I could write a story using my favorite Beatmania IIDX songs. It eventually turned into just starting from the very beginning and using songs from the older IIDX titles. I'm not a writer in any sense so you'll see some grammatical errors and bad writing, especially in the first story as it is just a giant blob of messiness. I was writing late at night since that's the only time my brain is capable of writing long items including essays. So here's a little info about the two.
My first story features mainly IIDX references and the main character is named Tudy X. I first wrote that back in late April and posted it on Facebook. It doesn't have an official title yet but whenever I get around to editing and re-writing it a little bit I'll be sure to give it one. My second story entitled "Marisa Stole the Colorful Cookie" is based around a theme of DJ YOSHITAKA and his aliases. It also features most of his songs with several references to other Bemani songs,games, and random things from the internet. It's not set in the same story line as my first story but it's in the same universe and timeline as it. So if you feel like taking a few minutes to read everything go ahead and read my two stories. Thanks!
Untitled Tudy X. Story
On 20,November, Dr. Love practiced his First Style and helped deliver and bring into the world a set of twins named Bemanee, who later died in infancy, and Tudy X who has gone on to live a rich and fabulous life. This was the Beginning of life for what would be one of the greatest and most succesful sources entertainment coming out of the Land of the Rising Sun. Tudy X.'s parents treated him like a Prince on a Star since his future had been a GAMBOL but no one knew he would one day be diving money. As a child, he was full of e-motion and with his sparkling Deep Clear Eyes everyone around him knew he had an abundance of Special Energy that made every individual in the room celebrate. He could Keep on Movin and remove even the slightest Gentle stress deep in you. As he grew older he learned to love music. He and a few of his classmates created a small school activity club Named "Substream". Their first theme party had every memeber dress as a Yankee or delinquet so they could all become a Macho Gang. Originally only boys were allowed to join the club but later on during their time at school many girls were allowed to join as well. The school group was starting to grow and it became difficult to distinguish members from one another. So Tudy X. being a creator of the group decided there needed to be a
style system to create sub-groups so they could identify the members apart from each other and to Shake things up. The first of such styles was called Second Style. Everyone really didn't mind it much so they let it stick. As the group continued to grow there were many different types of members as well. One was a Hitch Hiker even who had a sort of Brazilian Rhyme to his speech pattern. It gave some members a Headache but no one seemed to care about it much. Junglist King was a musical prodigee of sorts as he was able to Get on Beat even in his morning prayer. He claimed he just "LET THE BEAT HIT EM!" and said it was his Second Style (Hip Hop Paradise). He was even nice enough to give the Hitch Hiker $0.59 out of his spare change jar. The Third and Fourth Styles were actually a group of soon to be graduates that would eventually move on to the rest of their lives in a few short months, but until spring came around they let their last few months mean the most to them. One fond moment they shared together was the DYNAMITE RAVE thrown by Tudy X. and his cousin DeeDee R. Tudy X. sought out his cousin for advice after hearing she was in town for a few months. He told her he had a DREAM that they had a massive party on a Skyscraper with a S.O.S. theme. After going through many hotels in the area they settled on the Schlagwerk Hotel over a few others such as the LEADING CYBER Hotel, five fathoms Hotel, and the Garden of Love as they didn't have the space necessary. Some members were actually not able to go and were removed from the member list. This became a regualar action for future events that were hosted by Tudy X. as a type of tradition. The DYNAMITE RAVE was also known as the final event before the END OF THE CENTURY so DeeDee R. gave it a secondary name. The Fourth Style was one of Tudy X's favorite styles and it showed. His parents noted that it brought back his Special energy that they hadn't seen since he was an infant.The group held their meetings in a separate part of the school building on the NORTH side where they mentioned that "Nothing Ain't Stoppin' Us" and dubbed the room Clione. Sometimes they had to meet outside as that wing of the school was Under Constrution a few months out of one school year as the school was raising the roof HIGHER a few feet. Fourth Style at
times needed an extra hand to help around so they brought in some other style members and even the Hitch Hiker 2 was able to join. An exchange student from the United States joined the style for fun. A few members liked him enough and gave him a lasting nickname of NEW YORK CITY BOY.
Marisa Stole the Colorful Cookie
Hello Mr. Alamode , I see you are in quite a bit of a bind here. If you haven't noticed already you are currently sitting in an enclosed vault, but that's not what your issue is here. You are just minutes away from certain doom. "Why?" You might ask. Well, if you must know you are locked away with a parasite. This is no ordinary parasite, however, it's a genetically altered parasite known as an Anasakis. This is special though, it has been converted from a lowly nematode that just infects it's hosts as a minor nuisance to an inferno proof, mind altering machine that is capable of living outside of a host. That's right Mr.Alamode, you are pray to something that is so small it's just the fraction of the size of your thumbnail. You might want to consider recalling some of those fancy flashback sequences you like to have all the time as you won't have any memories left once it starts attacking your central nervous system. There is no way you will be able to quell your title as my seventh slave. Catch me... If you can. Oh wait, You can't! <b>MUAHAHA</b> Go ahead and make a wish, it'll do you no good anyway....
*Flashback to 2004*
"Hey, Michael! Why don't you battle me in a game of skill and wits?"
"You know I don't have the time to be playing games with you right now Akira. I have to finish my RED Team project for Tudy X. He'll KILL me if I don't have this done in time. I mean it's my first project, I was just, JUST let into the team, and he's already made me producer. I'm too stressed as you can see and that is why I don't have time to play."
"It's just a NoN-Fiction Story! I don't see how it can be that hard. Well, alright do you think I could help at all? I figured I'd at least help out if I can. What's the title of the thing anyway? <u>Miracle Meets</u>?"
" No it's called <u>D.A.N.C.E</u>, it's the story of a beautiful princess named Kanako Hoshino. She was born in a starfield and sent from her home to the Earth to help it's inhabitants fight off a group of aliens known as Captivate. The Almagest is their big leader but he doesn't make much of an appearance in this story but it's a pretty long story and that's why I'm taking so long with it. I have almost everything written out. I just need some names for the trio of aliens that attack and the ending! Can you believe it? I have the story all written out mostly but I don't have the most important thing written out, the characters and the ending."
"Well.. Maybe... Hmm.... GOT IT! How about you name the Captivate aliens Purification, Oath, and Judgement? It's random but they kind of have a little connection going on there that matches your story. Since your aliens think they are helping the solar system by being the justice system as dictated by their leader. And since they go around "captivating" the inhabitants of other regions to take them over that should be their group name."
"Actually... That's not such a bad idea. I guess you really have helped out. Maybe, if I do a sequel, I'll have the group re-born as a team that fights for Hoshino-hime instead of The Almagest and they will go by a new name as Captivate2. Sound good to you?"
"Sure, It'll show your other group that you are capable in another team. I think DES-ROW made a mistake of letting you run out on your own. Are you still going to help them out though?"
"Yeah, for sure. I haven't left them completely I just wanted to be able to do my own ideas on my own for the most part. On a random note, aren't you supposed to be getting ready for a date tonight with VANESSA?"
"Oh snap! I forgot, thanks Michael! I think we should hook up sometime and do a collaboration in the future. I think we'd make a great team."
"HAHA! Yeah sounds like a plan. You better get moving Akira before VANESSA gets you with that deceptive look of hers. I can see you now trying to beg yourself some mercy out of her hyper self. 'Oh please no VANESSA not the contract! Not the contract!' She'll have you going at the top of your lungs 'I'm Screaming LOVE!'"
"Yeah I'm going, I'm going. Later Michael."
*Three and a half hours later*
*TV turns on*
(TV): Hey! do you wanna feel SOOO energetic? Try Powerth... *click* ...filled with the sign of me. I can feel the field of the Cyber For... *click* and we at KIRLogic can show you how to MAKE IT MAKE MONEY! ... *click* Next up on History, the decedents of the man who first found the gold in Alaska that started the historic GOLD RUSH have found even more gold!.
*TV turns off*
"Yeah as I was saying jun, I think Tudy X. will like my first story. It has great potential and I see it leading to me being around Tudy X. for a long time to come."
"That's great Michael! I think you should keep your head up and Look to the Sky. So when are you going to come back out to e-lma? I heard you could get a job with SOMEONE, hint hint. Also, The Plastic Ambition needs you back so hurry up and help me get somethings done. Okay? You won a contest last time with your last song and you left before you were able to pick up your prize. There is a lonely but Lucky Vacuum with your name on it!"
"Don't worry about it jun. I'll be back before you know it. I just wish this was actually an Endless Summer Story so I could just have fun and hang out with MENDES, Evans, and Elisha."
"Hey, isn't Elisha your High School Love? If I remember correctly you called her 'Darling my LUV' in a chat at one time on Zenius-I-vanisher. I think SIlverdragon754 just wrote an exclamation mark or something like that and Aegis went off about how much he loves Broken Eden."
"I remember that... I remember it all. And thanks to you garb has never left me alone about the stupid thing. I think he keeps hitting on Elisha in chat but I'm not sure. He just makes random references to other people like DeeDee R. and that Dance ManiaX guy."
"Doesn't he know DeeDee R. and Tudy X. are cousins?"
"I have no clue, I don't care as long as he leaves me alone. It's bad enough Aegis keeps thinking Chewphoria, Telperion, and sharibetsu are women when they are clearly guys so you can see the joke going there."
"I ate Pie"
"That's a great, jun.... Really great."
"Yeah I know. Well I'm gonna get off the phone here. I got bored trying to watch T.V. because there wasn't anything on. I think I'm gonna head out to the arcade and play some Dancing Stage SuperNOVA 3. I think I will finally pass Black Hole on Expert. You know that Naoki Underground song that's way harder than Pluto Relinquish on Challenge? Yeah I MIGHT pass it. I'll call you when I get done when ever that is."
"Okay, I have to get ready to head over to the mall and meet up with the girls anyway. Bye Michael."
*Flash forward to present day*
"So Mr. Alamode, what did you think about? I saw your eyes go blank there for a minute? Oh I know you were probably thinking about your 'long lost love'. What was her name? Something like Elisha! I know it all Mr. Alamode. I know everything about you and before you become my slave I'm going to explain my ENTIRE plan to you in minute detail. I'll show you Guilt & Love and the reason why you never had a chance running away from me in that Spring Rain many, many years ago.
My first story features mainly IIDX references and the main character is named Tudy X. I first wrote that back in late April and posted it on Facebook. It doesn't have an official title yet but whenever I get around to editing and re-writing it a little bit I'll be sure to give it one. My second story entitled "Marisa Stole the Colorful Cookie" is based around a theme of DJ YOSHITAKA and his aliases. It also features most of his songs with several references to other Bemani songs,games, and random things from the internet. It's not set in the same story line as my first story but it's in the same universe and timeline as it. So if you feel like taking a few minutes to read everything go ahead and read my two stories. Thanks!
Untitled Tudy X. Story
On 20,November, Dr. Love practiced his First Style and helped deliver and bring into the world a set of twins named Bemanee, who later died in infancy, and Tudy X who has gone on to live a rich and fabulous life. This was the Beginning of life for what would be one of the greatest and most succesful sources entertainment coming out of the Land of the Rising Sun. Tudy X.'s parents treated him like a Prince on a Star since his future had been a GAMBOL but no one knew he would one day be diving money. As a child, he was full of e-motion and with his sparkling Deep Clear Eyes everyone around him knew he had an abundance of Special Energy that made every individual in the room celebrate. He could Keep on Movin and remove even the slightest Gentle stress deep in you. As he grew older he learned to love music. He and a few of his classmates created a small school activity club Named "Substream". Their first theme party had every memeber dress as a Yankee or delinquet so they could all become a Macho Gang. Originally only boys were allowed to join the club but later on during their time at school many girls were allowed to join as well. The school group was starting to grow and it became difficult to distinguish members from one another. So Tudy X. being a creator of the group decided there needed to be a
style system to create sub-groups so they could identify the members apart from each other and to Shake things up. The first of such styles was called Second Style. Everyone really didn't mind it much so they let it stick. As the group continued to grow there were many different types of members as well. One was a Hitch Hiker even who had a sort of Brazilian Rhyme to his speech pattern. It gave some members a Headache but no one seemed to care about it much. Junglist King was a musical prodigee of sorts as he was able to Get on Beat even in his morning prayer. He claimed he just "LET THE BEAT HIT EM!" and said it was his Second Style (Hip Hop Paradise). He was even nice enough to give the Hitch Hiker $0.59 out of his spare change jar. The Third and Fourth Styles were actually a group of soon to be graduates that would eventually move on to the rest of their lives in a few short months, but until spring came around they let their last few months mean the most to them. One fond moment they shared together was the DYNAMITE RAVE thrown by Tudy X. and his cousin DeeDee R. Tudy X. sought out his cousin for advice after hearing she was in town for a few months. He told her he had a DREAM that they had a massive party on a Skyscraper with a S.O.S. theme. After going through many hotels in the area they settled on the Schlagwerk Hotel over a few others such as the LEADING CYBER Hotel, five fathoms Hotel, and the Garden of Love as they didn't have the space necessary. Some members were actually not able to go and were removed from the member list. This became a regualar action for future events that were hosted by Tudy X. as a type of tradition. The DYNAMITE RAVE was also known as the final event before the END OF THE CENTURY so DeeDee R. gave it a secondary name. The Fourth Style was one of Tudy X's favorite styles and it showed. His parents noted that it brought back his Special energy that they hadn't seen since he was an infant.The group held their meetings in a separate part of the school building on the NORTH side where they mentioned that "Nothing Ain't Stoppin' Us" and dubbed the room Clione. Sometimes they had to meet outside as that wing of the school was Under Constrution a few months out of one school year as the school was raising the roof HIGHER a few feet. Fourth Style at
times needed an extra hand to help around so they brought in some other style members and even the Hitch Hiker 2 was able to join. An exchange student from the United States joined the style for fun. A few members liked him enough and gave him a lasting nickname of NEW YORK CITY BOY.
Marisa Stole the Colorful Cookie
Hello Mr. Alamode , I see you are in quite a bit of a bind here. If you haven't noticed already you are currently sitting in an enclosed vault, but that's not what your issue is here. You are just minutes away from certain doom. "Why?" You might ask. Well, if you must know you are locked away with a parasite. This is no ordinary parasite, however, it's a genetically altered parasite known as an Anasakis. This is special though, it has been converted from a lowly nematode that just infects it's hosts as a minor nuisance to an inferno proof, mind altering machine that is capable of living outside of a host. That's right Mr.Alamode, you are pray to something that is so small it's just the fraction of the size of your thumbnail. You might want to consider recalling some of those fancy flashback sequences you like to have all the time as you won't have any memories left once it starts attacking your central nervous system. There is no way you will be able to quell your title as my seventh slave. Catch me... If you can. Oh wait, You can't! <b>MUAHAHA</b> Go ahead and make a wish, it'll do you no good anyway....
*Flashback to 2004*
"Hey, Michael! Why don't you battle me in a game of skill and wits?"
"You know I don't have the time to be playing games with you right now Akira. I have to finish my RED Team project for Tudy X. He'll KILL me if I don't have this done in time. I mean it's my first project, I was just, JUST let into the team, and he's already made me producer. I'm too stressed as you can see and that is why I don't have time to play."
"It's just a NoN-Fiction Story! I don't see how it can be that hard. Well, alright do you think I could help at all? I figured I'd at least help out if I can. What's the title of the thing anyway? <u>Miracle Meets</u>?"
" No it's called <u>D.A.N.C.E</u>, it's the story of a beautiful princess named Kanako Hoshino. She was born in a starfield and sent from her home to the Earth to help it's inhabitants fight off a group of aliens known as Captivate. The Almagest is their big leader but he doesn't make much of an appearance in this story but it's a pretty long story and that's why I'm taking so long with it. I have almost everything written out. I just need some names for the trio of aliens that attack and the ending! Can you believe it? I have the story all written out mostly but I don't have the most important thing written out, the characters and the ending."
"Well.. Maybe... Hmm.... GOT IT! How about you name the Captivate aliens Purification, Oath, and Judgement? It's random but they kind of have a little connection going on there that matches your story. Since your aliens think they are helping the solar system by being the justice system as dictated by their leader. And since they go around "captivating" the inhabitants of other regions to take them over that should be their group name."
"Actually... That's not such a bad idea. I guess you really have helped out. Maybe, if I do a sequel, I'll have the group re-born as a team that fights for Hoshino-hime instead of The Almagest and they will go by a new name as Captivate2. Sound good to you?"
"Sure, It'll show your other group that you are capable in another team. I think DES-ROW made a mistake of letting you run out on your own. Are you still going to help them out though?"
"Yeah, for sure. I haven't left them completely I just wanted to be able to do my own ideas on my own for the most part. On a random note, aren't you supposed to be getting ready for a date tonight with VANESSA?"
"Oh snap! I forgot, thanks Michael! I think we should hook up sometime and do a collaboration in the future. I think we'd make a great team."
"HAHA! Yeah sounds like a plan. You better get moving Akira before VANESSA gets you with that deceptive look of hers. I can see you now trying to beg yourself some mercy out of her hyper self. 'Oh please no VANESSA not the contract! Not the contract!' She'll have you going at the top of your lungs 'I'm Screaming LOVE!'"
"Yeah I'm going, I'm going. Later Michael."
*Three and a half hours later*
*TV turns on*
(TV): Hey! do you wanna feel SOOO energetic? Try Powerth... *click* ...filled with the sign of me. I can feel the field of the Cyber For... *click* and we at KIRLogic can show you how to MAKE IT MAKE MONEY! ... *click* Next up on History, the decedents of the man who first found the gold in Alaska that started the historic GOLD RUSH have found even more gold!.
*TV turns off*
"Yeah as I was saying jun, I think Tudy X. will like my first story. It has great potential and I see it leading to me being around Tudy X. for a long time to come."
"That's great Michael! I think you should keep your head up and Look to the Sky. So when are you going to come back out to e-lma? I heard you could get a job with SOMEONE, hint hint. Also, The Plastic Ambition needs you back so hurry up and help me get somethings done. Okay? You won a contest last time with your last song and you left before you were able to pick up your prize. There is a lonely but Lucky Vacuum with your name on it!"
"Don't worry about it jun. I'll be back before you know it. I just wish this was actually an Endless Summer Story so I could just have fun and hang out with MENDES, Evans, and Elisha."
"Hey, isn't Elisha your High School Love? If I remember correctly you called her 'Darling my LUV' in a chat at one time on Zenius-I-vanisher. I think SIlverdragon754 just wrote an exclamation mark or something like that and Aegis went off about how much he loves Broken Eden."
"I remember that... I remember it all. And thanks to you garb has never left me alone about the stupid thing. I think he keeps hitting on Elisha in chat but I'm not sure. He just makes random references to other people like DeeDee R. and that Dance ManiaX guy."
"Doesn't he know DeeDee R. and Tudy X. are cousins?"
"I have no clue, I don't care as long as he leaves me alone. It's bad enough Aegis keeps thinking Chewphoria, Telperion, and sharibetsu are women when they are clearly guys so you can see the joke going there."
"I ate Pie"
"That's a great, jun.... Really great."
"Yeah I know. Well I'm gonna get off the phone here. I got bored trying to watch T.V. because there wasn't anything on. I think I'm gonna head out to the arcade and play some Dancing Stage SuperNOVA 3. I think I will finally pass Black Hole on Expert. You know that Naoki Underground song that's way harder than Pluto Relinquish on Challenge? Yeah I MIGHT pass it. I'll call you when I get done when ever that is."
"Okay, I have to get ready to head over to the mall and meet up with the girls anyway. Bye Michael."
*Flash forward to present day*
"So Mr. Alamode, what did you think about? I saw your eyes go blank there for a minute? Oh I know you were probably thinking about your 'long lost love'. What was her name? Something like Elisha! I know it all Mr. Alamode. I know everything about you and before you become my slave I'm going to explain my ENTIRE plan to you in minute detail. I'll show you Guilt & Love and the reason why you never had a chance running away from me in that Spring Rain many, many years ago.