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Post #27481 · Posted at 2016-05-16 02:50:13am 9.3 years ago

Offline JunkoXXX
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"I have no words for my life"
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How do you guys like my conclusion to my essay?
"These days I live in three worlds: my dreams, and the experiences of my new life, which trigger memories from the past"(Beah 20). People live through many things. They are dreams, realities, and past memories. These things affect humans and make them what type of person they are. People are willing to do anything for their dreams, but reality gets to them. They possibly have something blocking the path to their dreams. They will do anything to get past it. For example, Hitler wanted Germany to be the best country. He tried everything to get up there. He persuaded, lied, went to prison, and he still was able to do what he wanted. That is not just him ;in fact that is everyone on this planet. Humans are good, just people want things, or their beliefs get to them. It is just nature.

Post #27482 · Posted at 2016-05-16 03:35:05am 9.3 years ago

Offline The Legendary DJXYZ
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Impressive. Must have taken a lot of work.
So I tried some more stuff on BeepBox, and ended up remixing Billie Jean. I've discovered that by compiling data outputs from BeepBox in a single Audacity file that more tracks can be achieved, as well as some basic editing to make it sound more modernized. I think I'm going to be sticking with this method to create some very complex 8-bit tracks for an upcoming project.
Not around here too often anymore, but I still play DDR & maimai!
My final contest run was in my signature so I guess I'll keep it here for those who wanna play my last few charts:
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Post #27483 · Posted at 2016-05-16 03:48:54am 9.3 years ago

Offline NewbStepper
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"Crybabies unite~ ♡"
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How do you guys like my conclusion to my essay?
"These days I live in three worlds: my dreams, and the experiences of my new life, which trigger memories from the past"(Beah 20). People live through many things. They are dreams, realities, and past memories. These things affect humans and make them what type of person they are. People are willing to do anything for their dreams, but reality gets to them. They possibly have something blocking the path to their dreams. They will do anything to get past it. For example, Hitler wanted Germany to be the best country. He tried everything to get up there. He persuaded, lied, went to prison, and he still was able to do what he wanted. That is not just him ;in fact that is everyone on this planet. Humans are good, just people want things, or their beliefs get to them. It is just nature.
Since I haven't read your entire essay, I won't be able to comment on how to improve the conclusion in and of itself. I might just want to clean it up a bit for now and ask you about what you intended upon this essay.

"These days I live in three worlds: my dreams, and the experiences of my new life, which trigger memories from the past" (Beah 20).
People live through many things; dreams, realities, and past memories. All of these things shape humans into who they become. While people aggressively pursue their dreams, reality gets in their way. It seems as if something in the circle of life comes to break those dreams, and people will do anything to get past that something. For example, Hitler wanted Germany to rise to power. To see this happen, he tried everything he could and faced his share of struggles. He persuaded, he lied, and he went to prison. In the end, however, his dreams came true. This example is more than just a depiction of Hitler's character; it is an example of human nature in general. Humans are inherently good beings. It is a complex combination of human wants and beliefs that make humans act the way they do. It is simply in their nature to chase their wants above all else.


One impression I've had from reading this paragraph is that it seems like an introductory paragraph, rather than a concluding paragraph. Perhaps your focus is on Hitler as an example of the way human nature works?
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Post #27484 · Posted at 2016-05-16 03:50:12am 9.3 years ago

Offline SomethingRandom
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When I was a child, my speech, feelings, and thinking were all those of a child; now that I am a man, I have no more use for childish ways. What we see now is like a dim image in a mirror; then we shall see face-to-face. What I know now is only partial; then it will be complete-as complete as God's knowledge of me.


(If you know why I am posting this, good for you.)

Post #27485 · Posted at 2016-05-16 03:51:32am 9.3 years ago

Offline Sigrev2
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How do you guys like my conclusion to my essay?
"These days I live in three worlds: my dreams, and the experiences of my new life, which trigger memories from the past"(Beah 20). People live through many things. They are dreams, realities, and past memories. These things affect humans and make them what type of person they are. People are willing to do anything for their dreams, but reality gets to them. They possibly have something blocking the path to their dreams. They will do anything to get past it. For example, Hitler wanted Germany to be the best country. He tried everything to get up there. He persuaded, lied, went to prison, and he still was able to do what he wanted. That is not just him ;in fact that is everyone on this planet. Humans are good, just people want things, or their beliefs get to them. It is just nature.
Personally, I'd include that quote at the very beginning of your essay. Or at the very end. Personally, I think it's a strong way to start the whole thing off, instead of having it plastered before the final paragraph.
Aside from a few needed grammar fixes, it's alright.

Post #27486 · Posted at 2016-05-16 05:27:08am 9.3 years ago

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The new DOOM game is absolutely amazing. My childhood is vindicated. Big Grin

Post #27487 · Posted at 2016-05-16 12:58:37pm 9.3 years ago

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"bootylicious "

Post #27488 · Posted at 2016-05-16 01:57:00pm 9.3 years ago

Offline hunterc
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Two nights ago, I got away with staying up until 3:45 AM. Why? Because I took a long nap earlier that day from 4:00 PM about 6:30 PM, which led to me having a lot of leftover energy to use. I then ended up becoming really tired the next day and went to bed at the very early time of about 5:00 PM.

Yet, even after 13 hours of sleep, I woke up somewhat tired. I'll remind myself not to do all-nighters unless I'm really feeling like an insomniac.
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More active on Twitter nowadays. I'm also probably the only casual DDR player with an eAmuse pass.

Post #27489 · Posted at 2016-05-16 02:02:53pm 9.3 years ago

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Seriously screwed myself over yesterday, stayed up until 7:00 AM, and woke up at 5:00 PM today. X_X

Post #27490 · Posted at 2016-05-16 02:33:51pm 9.3 years ago

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When I was a child, my speech, feelings, and thinking were all those of a child; now that I am a man, I have no more use for childish ways. What we see now is like a dim image in a mirror; then we shall see face-to-face. What I know now is only partial; then it will be complete-as complete as God's knowledge of me.


(If you know why I am posting this, good for you.)

I'm afraid I don't know why, but I'd like to add my favorite C.S. Lewis quote, "“Critics who treat 'adult' as a term of approval, instead of as a merely descriptive term, cannot be adult themselves..."

Post #27491 · Posted at 2016-05-16 03:43:20pm 9.3 years ago

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That's a good quote @zeroroute
as for why I brought up the quote from Corinthians, the quote is used in GITS. And there is a new GiTS movie coming out.

Post #27492 · Posted at 2016-05-16 06:56:41pm 9.3 years ago

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So, today is my birthday. I hit the big 19 today. I actually celebrated yesterday. I got a $100 Amazon Giftcard, $100 bill,an Anime Matsuri Shirt, and plenty of snacks. On top of that, I got to go to Dave & Buster's and play some kick-ass games.
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Post #27493 · Posted at 2016-05-16 07:07:30pm 9.3 years ago

Post #27494 · Posted at 2016-05-16 07:09:54pm 9.3 years ago

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So, today is my birthday. I hit the big 19 today. I actually celebrated yesterday. I got a $100 Amazon Giftcard, $100 bill,an Anime Matsuri Shirt, and plenty of snacks. On top of that, I got to go to Dave & Buster's and play some kick-ass games.

Happy birthday, glad you had fun! Big Grin
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Post #27495 · Posted at 2016-05-16 09:04:43pm 9.3 years ago

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Dunno whether to make a thread about this or not but the truth is out now about Super Arcade's re-opening - a family fun center is going to open right across from the place Watson leased http://superdojo.blogspot.com/2016/05/could-this-be-whats-holding-things-up.html .

Post #27496 · Posted at 2016-05-16 11:26:34pm 9.3 years ago

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"Crybabies unite~ ♡"
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So, today is my birthday. I hit the big 19 today. I actually celebrated yesterday. I got a $100 Amazon Giftcard, $100 bill,an Anime Matsuri Shirt, and plenty of snacks. On top of that, I got to go to Dave & Buster's and play some kick-ass games.
That's so awesome! Glad you had a great time! Happy
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Post #27497 · Posted at 2016-05-17 07:46:27pm 9.3 years ago

Offline 1033Forest
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Did you know there is a version of SM 3.9+ with more note types, and higher note resolutions up to 768th? It is SM AMX.

I was wondering, in SM 5.1, that note resolutions up to 1536th could be added since with the new noteskin system, there is finally a way to not make the existing noteskins break, and the new colors in some whatever x16 noteskins can finally be tested out. That was a feature I requested for SM5 since 2012.

If they were added these would be the note snaps:
4th, 8th, 12th, 16th, 24th, 32nd, 48th, 64th, 96th, 128th, 192nd, 256th, 384th, 512th, 768th, 1536th

Post #27498 · Posted at 2016-05-17 08:17:39pm 9.3 years ago

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Why would you need them? That looks like additions for the sake of additions, not for an actual purpose.
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Post #27499 · Posted at 2016-05-17 08:24:34pm 9.3 years ago

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the day i see somebody use a 1536th note is the day i die

Post #27500 · Posted at 2016-05-17 08:27:28pm 9.3 years ago

Offline 1033Forest
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Why would you need them? That looks like additions for the sake of additions, not for an actual purpose.

One use of them would just be to test the new noteskin system out, but other than that, they won't really be needed unless your song is like 1 BPM. And if these notes were to be used, then a really high speed mod would be needed to easily read through them.
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