Post #1 · Publicado en 2016-06-18 10:33:51pm Hace 7.9 años
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So darkstorm091 had the idea of a workshop thread for people's music, and personally I think that's an excellent idea.
Feel free to post your music here for feedback, criticism and opinions, to help improve your work!
Feel free to post your music here for feedback, criticism and opinions, to help improve your work!
Post #2 · Publicado en 2016-06-19 03:06:15am Hace 7.9 años
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https://soundcloud.com/william-hunteman-jr/flowey-remix-v1 this is something i've worked on a little
Post #3 · Publicado en 2016-06-21 10:19:49pm Hace 7.9 años
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https://instaud.io/reF thing i made in about an hour tonight. Dunno if this will become a Z4U submission or not.
Post #4 · Publicado en 2016-06-21 11:59:24pm Hace 7.9 años
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Hmm... It sounds really nice, but i think the melody could maybe use a little more variation when it starts, and the percussion in the beginning sounds a little too bit-crushed in my opinion. Other than that, pretty nice!
Post #5 · Publicado en 2016-06-23 04:06:35am Hace 7.9 años
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Post #6 · Publicado en 2016-06-23 04:11:40am Hace 7.9 años
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Sounds really cool, am i hearing a Max 300 sample in there somewhere? You should consider submitting it to Z4U!
Post #7 · Publicado en 2016-06-23 04:21:50am Hace 7.9 años
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Quote: midone
Sounds really cool, am i hearing a Max 300 sample in there somewhere? You should consider submitting it to Z4U!
Yes, I used a Max 300 sample in the piece.
Also, thanks for your critique. I'll keep that in mind!
Post #8 · Publicado en 2016-06-23 04:27:53am Hace 7.9 años
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i might make resources for music like drum kit noises or something, what do you guys think?
Post #9 · Publicado en 2016-06-24 10:42:35am Hace 7.9 años
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I made this last year for the first Z-I-M project but didn't quite make the deadline, so I'm considering putting it into this next one:
https://instaud.io/rs8
https://instaud.io/rs8
Post #10 · Publicado en 2016-06-25 12:57:44am Hace 7.9 años
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You should! It sounds nice!
Post #11 · Publicado en 2016-08-31 06:41:54am Hace 7.7 años
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https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/201480223680757760/220420446540136448/untitled4.wav
i don't have a title for it. i don't even know if the link works. but it's the first real project i've worked on since No Cure's release, and i just wanna get some opinions on it.
i don't have a title for it. i don't even know if the link works. but it's the first real project i've worked on since No Cure's release, and i just wanna get some opinions on it.
Post #12 · Publicado en 2016-09-02 03:33:04am Hace 7.7 años
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It sounds nice! Kind of reminds me of bemani menu music!
Post #13 · Publicado en 2016-09-03 03:06:44am Hace 7.7 años
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So I finally made something that doesn't sound like a complete mess. It's a Touhou remix too, although it took me a while to figure out the entire chord progression of the song (at least I think I did).
So I finally made something that doesn't sound like a complete mess. It's a Touhou remix too, although it took me a while to figure out the entire chord progression of the song (at least I think I did).
Post #14 · Publicado en 2016-09-03 06:49:19am Hace 7.7 años
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https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/201480223680757760/220420446540136448/untitled4.wav
i don't have a title for it. i don't even know if the link works. but it's the first real project i've worked on since No Cure's release, and i just wanna get some opinions on it.
i don't have a title for it. i don't even know if the link works. but it's the first real project i've worked on since No Cure's release, and i just wanna get some opinions on it.
I'm not sure what the intent of this is, but it does sound like it's a title screen for a game. Can definitely get behind the arps, which sound great.
Quote: ledgam3r1279
https://soundcloud.com/liberalotaku/moonlight-reflection
So I finally made something that doesn't sound like a complete mess. It's a Touhou remix too, although it took me a while to figure out the entire chord progression of the song (at least I think I did).
So I finally made something that doesn't sound like a complete mess. It's a Touhou remix too, although it took me a while to figure out the entire chord progression of the song (at least I think I did).
So you intended to submit this for Diverse System's thE.works but didn't make the deadline? Considering you were trying to go for a chill mood as with the album, I got a vibe similar to Rin's "House set of _____" set of Touhou albums and that makes it good in my book.
Post #15 · Publicado en 2016-09-10 05:40:58pm Hace 7.7 años
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https://soundcloud.com/anonywolf/katherine-calling-early-demo
Made a quick demo of a song I'm writing about my previous girlfriend. Still needs a second verse. Also needs a definitive bridge. LMK your opinions please.
Also, I'm aware of the shaky delivery. Please be nice.
Made a quick demo of a song I'm writing about my previous girlfriend. Still needs a second verse. Also needs a definitive bridge. LMK your opinions please.
Also, I'm aware of the shaky delivery. Please be nice.
Post #16 · Publicado en 2016-09-15 02:19:52am Hace 7.7 años
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Nice job, Anonywolf. Really all i can say that needs improvement is your vocal volume. other than that, really good!
Post #17 · Publicado en 2016-09-16 01:26:49am Hace 7.7 años
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https://soundcloud.com/derrix-106459298/parfait-sample
Only a sample, but you can still give me feedback
Only a sample, but you can still give me feedback
Post #18 · Publicado en 2016-09-16 08:22:23pm Hace 7.7 años
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So, I FINALLY got a chance to use VocalWriter for something big~! Me and my buddy SZ64saulius collaborated on "Sweet Candy Party", an original happy hardcore track featuring the real voice of Alt! I wrote the lyrics and did the VocalWriter vocals, while SZ64saulius did the rest of the song. What do y'all think?
Post #19 · Publicado en 2016-09-17 07:03:56pm Hace 7.6 años
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Post #20 · Publicado en 2016-09-18 02:24:30pm Hace 7.6 años
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Quote: 01angel
So, I FINALLY got a chance to use VocalWriter for something big~! Me and my buddy SZ64saulius collaborated on "Sweet Candy Party", an original happy hardcore track featuring the real voice of Alt! I wrote the lyrics and did the VocalWriter vocals, while SZ64saulius did the rest of the song. What do y'all think?
The balance between music and vocals needs addressing here:
(0:19-0:32) The piano kind of takes away from the ALT vocal; I suggest removing that entirely from this section but I'm not sure if this will improve it, try going for a balance between instruments and the vocal here.
(1:20 onwards) The vocals really begin to clash with the music here, but this is likely a sync problem, as the vocals start a little too early and stumble over the instrumental. I'm not sure if the vocal track is even the same BPM as the instrumental, as the vocal delivery seems too fast here.
Just a few things that stood out from the first listen. Music production takes a lot of practice and experimentation to get better, so keep producing. This goes double especially since it looks like you can actually do things with the ALT vocal, which might come in handy with later productions.