Post #401 · Posted at 2017-01-23 08:25:22pm 7.2 years ago
two simfiles to make ? why ? u.u
Post #402 · Posted at 2017-01-23 08:31:33pm 7.2 years ago
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He's giving you the chance to make up for your null points last round. Two files means double the chances of racking up points. :P I say to embrace it.
In all seriousness, I believe that either Whistle or Uptown Funk* should be assigned to ledgam3r1279 and Scarz accidentally tagged them both with SupremeX.
Oh, I think I just figured out which one's Spork!'s without even listening to it.
In all seriousness, I believe that either Whistle or Uptown Funk* should be assigned to ledgam3r1279 and Scarz accidentally tagged them both with SupremeX.
Oh, I think I just figured out which one's Spork!'s without even listening to it.
Post #403 · Posted at 2017-01-23 08:36:46pm 7.2 years ago
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There's obviously been an error, let it get fixed
Post #404 · Posted at 2017-01-23 08:46:11pm 7.2 years ago
Turn Down For What? I'm cool with that, especially because it's a song I know! 
Let's get steppin'!
UPDATE: guess I spoke too soon. It's an alternative/punk version of the song...which I thought I'd like even better than the original version until I listened to it.
Going to request a veto for this round, please!
Let's get steppin'!UPDATE: guess I spoke too soon. It's an alternative/punk version of the song...which I thought I'd like even better than the original version until I listened to it.
Going to request a veto for this round, please!
Post #405 · Posted at 2017-01-23 10:09:21pm 7.2 years ago
Sorry about that error, getting out those post's can get messy at times.
I will leave Uptown Fuck however as that is a goddamnit great typo
I will leave Uptown Fuck however as that is a goddamnit great typo
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Turn Down For What? I'm cool with that, especially because it's a song I know! Let's get steppin'!
UPDATE: guess I spoke too soon. It's an alternative/punk version of the song...which I thought I'd like even better than the original version until I listened to it.
Going to request a veto for this round, please!
All is Wrecked Let's get steppin'!UPDATE: guess I spoke too soon. It's an alternative/punk version of the song...which I thought I'd like even better than the original version until I listened to it.
Going to request a veto for this round, please!
Post #406 · Posted at 2017-01-23 10:21:31pm 7.2 years ago
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Thank you! All is Wrecked should be easy for me. I'm familiar with it too - and I definitely like it a lot better than Turn Down For What! (Even the "real" version of the song!) 
Post #407 · Posted at 2017-01-23 10:44:24pm 7.2 years ago
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Oh, I think I just figured out which one's Spork!'s without even listening to it.
Oh yeah? Which one do you think it was?
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Spork - nightowl
Ok, this one will be a challenge. Love it.
Post #408 · Posted at 2017-01-23 10:46:50pm 7.2 years ago
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Uptown Fuck Funk.
ANYWAY I'm also getting the rightful challenge I deserve for sending the song I did this round, sorry if I end up going overboard trying to get it to stand out without becoming too repetitive (this is the case with a lot of happy hardcore files IMO; sometimes it's fine, other times not so much). ^^;
ANYWAY I'm also getting the rightful challenge I deserve for sending the song I did this round, sorry if I end up going overboard trying to get it to stand out without becoming too repetitive (this is the case with a lot of happy hardcore files IMO; sometimes it's fine, other times not so much). ^^;
Post #409 · Posted at 2017-01-23 11:09:56pm 7.2 years ago
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Wasn't expecting Iine to get that many points with how simple I made it. Cool.
Post #410 · Posted at 2017-01-23 11:49:30pm 7.2 years ago
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Just to clarify, would it be illegal to add graphics after the deadline for the file has passed?
I ask because the Summer Contest, if I recall, allows for modifications other than steps.
I ask because the Summer Contest, if I recall, allows for modifications other than steps.
Post #411 · Posted at 2017-01-24 01:16:04am 7.2 years ago
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Not sure why adding graphics after the deadline would be an issue. People really shouldn't be judging a file on graphics anyway. 
Post #412 · Posted at 2017-01-24 02:25:40am 7.2 years ago
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Not sure why adding graphics after the deadline would be an issue. People really shouldn't be judging a file on graphics anyway.
Not on its own, but graphics are part of a simfile the same way the steps are part of a simfile.
Even half-assed in MS Paint, i'd rather see something than nothing at all.
Post #413 · Posted at 2017-01-24 03:54:29am 7.2 years ago
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Just to clarify, would it be illegal to add graphics after the deadline for the file has passed?
yesif you do so, your actions will be held against you in a court of law and you will be sentenced to at least 3 years time in federal prison
Post #414 · Posted at 2017-01-24 02:35:20pm 7.2 years ago
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Nah, go ahead and add them. To be honest they're not important to the game at all and adding them later/not at all shouldn't effect anything.
Post #415 · Posted at 2017-01-25 01:47:41am 7.2 years ago
Looks like I'm first to vote this round.
+5 Text Me [ROOK]
+4 FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ]
+3 The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr]
+3 THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279]
As with the previous two rounds, you can see my comments here.
TOTALS
Text Me [ROOK] - 5
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ] - 4
The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr] - 3
THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279] - 3
constellation [5l1n65h07]
Copacabana (At The Copa) [mf32892]
Heathens [Nezemarth]
恋は白帯、サンシロー* [Gameoson]
L'esprit [01angel]
Salt lake Lostman [SupremeX]
ULTRA B+K [HealingDMax300]
*dammit, in retrospect I think I made a lot of dumb choices with this one
+5 Text Me [ROOK]
+4 FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ]
+3 The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr]
+3 THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279]
As with the previous two rounds, you can see my comments here.
TOTALS
Text Me [ROOK] - 5
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ] - 4
The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr] - 3
THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279] - 3
constellation [5l1n65h07]
Copacabana (At The Copa) [mf32892]
Heathens [Nezemarth]
恋は白帯、サンシロー* [Gameoson]
L'esprit [01angel]
Salt lake Lostman [SupremeX]
ULTRA B+K [HealingDMax300]
*dammit, in retrospect I think I made a lot of dumb choices with this one
Post #416 · Posted at 2017-01-25 10:20:36am 7.2 years ago
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Last updated: 2017-01-25 10:24am
So your general points radius is anything above 8.0, right?
Also:
I don't think you made that many dumb choices with Koi wa shiroobi at all, Gameoson. :P
Totals:
Text Me [ROOK] - 9
The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr] - 5
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ] - 4
恋は白帯、サンシロー [Gameoson] - 4
THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279] - 4
Heathens [Nezemarth] - 2
Copacabana (At The Copa) [mf32892] - 1
ULTRA B+K [HealingDMax300] - 1
constellation [5l1n65h07] - 0
L'esprit [01angel] - 0
Salt lake Lostman [SupremeX] - 0
Also:
(8.8) +4 Koi wa shiroobi, Sanshiro
(8.5) +4 Text Me
(8.4) +2 The Whip (The Reef Remix)
(8.2) +2 Heathens
(8.1) +1 THE ONE - English ver.
(8.0) +1 Copacabana (At The Copa)
(7.8) +1 ULTRA B+K
(7.1) HM FANTASTIC NxxD BABY
(5.0) +0 constellation
(2.7) !! L'esprit
(2.0) !! Salt Lake Lostman
Once again, if, at the end of this, you still want more feedback on your file (nitpick/analyzing measure by measure), drop me a PM.
constellation: Some 8ths in standard seemed RNG (e.g. what do b47.5 and 63.5 go to?), but you did what you could. This song is quite limiting on what can be done.
Heavy didn't sit as well with me. Your pattern choices aren't bad here, but this chart lacks cohesion. Even if the song is limiting, it seems like you forget what you're stepping and switch to something completely different at bizarre times and I just wasn't enjoying it.
For instance, b36-52 is weirdly constructed. You're following the synth but missing notes like 36.5 and 38.5. This is acceptable, I guess, but then b47-52 comes along and I genuinely can't figure out what you're following in this song. In fact, I don't think this section belongs in an 8 (but that's subjective), I would've made this a simple 8th stream, save for b51.25 and 51.75 (I think the clapping sound is loud enough to be stepped).
Another example... b100-132 distinctly follows the melody of the piano. But we have notes like b112.5 and 114.5 that seem to follow only the background piano and it's kinda disorienting. (Also there's no note on b137.5...)
Good try though. It's not a BAD file but it also can be improved by a lot.
Copacabana (At The Copa): This song is quite unnerving...
Standard was good and the double steps were easy to catch onto after a while but I feel like certain 4th notes should've been 16ths instead (b83, 85, and 87 for instance). Also, I feel like b79 should be an up arrow (the same at b78.5) since it's pretty clear you're following the background vocals.
Heavy was really good for what you've been given. But none of the 12th clusters are correct. Listen closely to the bass in parts such as b82-86, I'm sure the intention is 4th-16th-8th. And PERHAPS you could've empathized background vocal sounds like b75.5 and 87.5 with freezes?
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY: This is a good song. I'm legitimately jealous.
That warp is... certainly something.
In Standard, I feel like notes like b69 should be split to b69.75 and 70.5 instead (same case for b73). Good chart, though!
Heavy was a little bit sporadic in terms of rhythm choices (b27 goes to nothing, b33.25 should be b33.5, b50-51 should be 12ths instead of 16ths, etc.). It doesn't do it in a bad way, but it would've been better if it was closer to what the song was playing.
Heathens: The standard chart is pretty solid! I like the usage of spins in the beginning.
The heavy chart did the song justice for the most part, although there's a couple of odd things. b38 is weird, it might be a better idea as a right or left arrow. You missed jumps on b53 and 55. The 24th gallops section isn't 100% correct (for instance, b74.833 and 80.833 doesn't exist). b138.5 is also weird and maybe it should be a right arrow. The jump at b146 will culminate in a doublestep if you try to cross over it like the pattern before it is setting you up for. One way to fix it is to switch arrows b144.5 and 145. And finally, b99 should also be a mini freeze for consistency with the other "WATCH IT"s.
Interesting song, kinda reminds me of Aluminum City from Summer Contest 2016's ZIv Academy II theme.
Koi wa shiroobi, Sanshiro: The Standard and heavy charts were great! There's nothing in them I have to complain about.
Challenge is also great, although I usually crossover patterns like an UL jump followed by an UR jump (e.g. b140-141), and if I do that on this file it doesn't end well, and I just find it a little bizarre. That's personal preference though.
L'esprit: There are some strange patterns in Standard. I really only noticed one genuine doublestep. b84. You can avoid it by footswitching on b82-83 but it's kinda weird since this doesn't carry over to b86-87 and 90-91. A bigger problem, though, is that some jump patterns are very ambiguous. For instance, when players see the jump at b144 and the down arrow at b146, they'll probably hit 146 with their right foot since the right arrow panel is closer to down than up is. But then after the trill during b146-147, they'll have to suddenly twist in a short amount of time to hit the LU jump at b148 facing the right way. It's not the WORST problem but at speeds as high as this, it does start to get annoying. That aside, the rhythm choices are alright, save for b304-320 (the 2nd and 3rd jumps should be a beat up and there should be an arrow at b316).
Heavy seemed like kind of a step down. There weren't any unavoidable doublesteps, but... Remember when I talked about ambiguous jump patterns? There's a shit ton of them across this chart, I get that some players think "you should play the chart more than one time to understand how it works" but in this case I find it really unfun and annoying. (b224-225 is an example of this.) Also, this chart felt kinda underwhelming; Some parts of the chart seemed generic compared to others (why is b144-156 all 4ths, for instance? and why is b304-336, simply put, anti-climactic).
Challenge... uh... yeah, you got carried away. I think the freeze forced doublesteps were way too demanding at this speed. Specifically, the patterning given. Look at b20-21. This constitutes a candle (trust me, this patterning takes more effort than a normal 8th jack or even b20.5 being a right arrow instead), and at 185 BPM it's more demanding than the 16th streams, save for the ones that end with jumps (which also seem like an annoying difficulty spike). In some cases, the freeze forced doublesteps cause you to face backwards anyway (b104-108 is a good example of this). Above all that, this whole chart seems unplanned. I'm not sure what you're following at all during b64-72, for instance, and I don't hear anything at all meriting the freezes during b96-128 (it seems like the choir, but you abandon it during parts like b102-104), and I'm not sure why you miss notes like b115, given the chart's nature.
Sorry to say it but this seems like a giant step down from your previous submissions.
Salt lake Lostman: Standard was a genuine step up from your previous submission. There are no unresolved crossovers/unnecessary doublesteps in the chart at all! I wouldn't start the chart with an up arrow, though. Also, the 0 jumps thing doesn't sit well with me, I feel like it faced left too much near the end, and some of the rhythm choices seem noticeable held back too. But as I said, it's an improvement over your other standard charts. (it could be a fluke though, but I say to roll with it, heh)
It's too bad it didn't carry over to the heavy chart. You were so close (b78 is the only one that can't be avoided) though. The ending would also make you face backwards but it can technically be avoided by footswitching.
But in all other fields... it's really, really bland. I get you were going for a 6 footer but... By the time I reach b218 I'm just waiting for the simfile to end. The jump count being a total of 1 (at a random spot) isn't helping either. I'll admit, song draw might be what hurt you the most. The song, simfiling wise, stops being interesting around b128. But it still has potential, and there's so many notes you overlooked (b27.5? b32.5, 33.5, 34.5? ... b245, 246, 247? 249?) and the patterning is plain. It's understandable with Standard but for this chart... it just ends up being dull and forgettable, I'm sorry.
Text Me: Kinda wish Standard had even a couple of crossovers, but otherwise a well-made chart. The gimmick at b258 was a nice touch.
Heavy was solid and really reminds me of a WIP simfile I plan on releasing someday; I like it a lot! The only thing that's off right off the bat is I think the mine at b44.5 should be moved down to b45 (same case with b208.5 -> 209).
THE ONE - English ver.: Interesting to set the BPM as 97.5 instead of 130. In any case, personally I think that b27-75 should've been slower than the rest of the file, whether it be 65, 48.75, doubling the BPM of the rest of the chart to 195, a bunch of combinations, it's up to you really.
Anyway, Standard was pretty good and I like how it gives you chances to avoid the spins with footswitches. Heavy sure was interesting with its patterning. Again, the same thing I said about Koi wa shiroobi, Sanshiro applies in that if its not marked, I crossover patterns such as an UR jump followed by a UL jump and most of the time I found myself facing backwards. And with the intense patterning all around, I don't think I want to face backwards for this chart. Actually, some of the 16th jacks such as b85.5 seem just there and I'm not sure what's in that part of the song that merits only a jack there and not parts like b86-86.25 and 86.5-86.75. Overall, though, it suits the song very nicely and I still enjoyed it.
The Whip (The Reef Remix): Nothing to complain about Standard, it's a good chart!
There were some missed notes in heavy, I'm very certain b23.5 and other similar flourishes (maybe you could've used rolls in those parts) could've been acknowledged for this chart, but the rest plays out quite good as well.
Challenge is well structured for the most part, but I can't say I'm a big fan of UDDUish footswitches at fast speeds. It gets a bit out of hand even for my standards in this chart. The rest is pretty good (in particular, the beginning).
ULTRA B+K: Standard got a little awkward to play sometimes, but that's the song's fault and I still enjoyed it.
Jesus, Heavy got incredibly intense at times. O__o;
I feel like there's something wrong with b64-80 and other similar parts. It's technically sound, it just seems a little bit overwhelming and awkward to play (maybe the 16th at b66.25 has something to do with it). There's some other things I probably would've done differently, but above all it's pretty well structured.
(8.5) +4 Text Me
(8.4) +2 The Whip (The Reef Remix)
(8.2) +2 Heathens
(8.1) +1 THE ONE - English ver.
(8.0) +1 Copacabana (At The Copa)
(7.8) +1 ULTRA B+K
(7.1) HM FANTASTIC NxxD BABY
(5.0) +0 constellation
(2.7) !! L'esprit
(2.0) !! Salt Lake Lostman
Once again, if, at the end of this, you still want more feedback on your file (nitpick/analyzing measure by measure), drop me a PM.
constellation: Some 8ths in standard seemed RNG (e.g. what do b47.5 and 63.5 go to?), but you did what you could. This song is quite limiting on what can be done.
Heavy didn't sit as well with me. Your pattern choices aren't bad here, but this chart lacks cohesion. Even if the song is limiting, it seems like you forget what you're stepping and switch to something completely different at bizarre times and I just wasn't enjoying it.
For instance, b36-52 is weirdly constructed. You're following the synth but missing notes like 36.5 and 38.5. This is acceptable, I guess, but then b47-52 comes along and I genuinely can't figure out what you're following in this song. In fact, I don't think this section belongs in an 8 (but that's subjective), I would've made this a simple 8th stream, save for b51.25 and 51.75 (I think the clapping sound is loud enough to be stepped).
Another example... b100-132 distinctly follows the melody of the piano. But we have notes like b112.5 and 114.5 that seem to follow only the background piano and it's kinda disorienting. (Also there's no note on b137.5...)
Good try though. It's not a BAD file but it also can be improved by a lot.
Copacabana (At The Copa): This song is quite unnerving...
Standard was good and the double steps were easy to catch onto after a while but I feel like certain 4th notes should've been 16ths instead (b83, 85, and 87 for instance). Also, I feel like b79 should be an up arrow (the same at b78.5) since it's pretty clear you're following the background vocals.
Heavy was really good for what you've been given. But none of the 12th clusters are correct. Listen closely to the bass in parts such as b82-86, I'm sure the intention is 4th-16th-8th. And PERHAPS you could've empathized background vocal sounds like b75.5 and 87.5 with freezes?
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY: This is a good song. I'm legitimately jealous.
That warp is... certainly something.
In Standard, I feel like notes like b69 should be split to b69.75 and 70.5 instead (same case for b73). Good chart, though!
Heavy was a little bit sporadic in terms of rhythm choices (b27 goes to nothing, b33.25 should be b33.5, b50-51 should be 12ths instead of 16ths, etc.). It doesn't do it in a bad way, but it would've been better if it was closer to what the song was playing.
Heathens: The standard chart is pretty solid! I like the usage of spins in the beginning.
The heavy chart did the song justice for the most part, although there's a couple of odd things. b38 is weird, it might be a better idea as a right or left arrow. You missed jumps on b53 and 55. The 24th gallops section isn't 100% correct (for instance, b74.833 and 80.833 doesn't exist). b138.5 is also weird and maybe it should be a right arrow. The jump at b146 will culminate in a doublestep if you try to cross over it like the pattern before it is setting you up for. One way to fix it is to switch arrows b144.5 and 145. And finally, b99 should also be a mini freeze for consistency with the other "WATCH IT"s.
Interesting song, kinda reminds me of Aluminum City from Summer Contest 2016's ZIv Academy II theme.
Koi wa shiroobi, Sanshiro: The Standard and heavy charts were great! There's nothing in them I have to complain about.
Challenge is also great, although I usually crossover patterns like an UL jump followed by an UR jump (e.g. b140-141), and if I do that on this file it doesn't end well, and I just find it a little bizarre. That's personal preference though.
L'esprit: There are some strange patterns in Standard. I really only noticed one genuine doublestep. b84. You can avoid it by footswitching on b82-83 but it's kinda weird since this doesn't carry over to b86-87 and 90-91. A bigger problem, though, is that some jump patterns are very ambiguous. For instance, when players see the jump at b144 and the down arrow at b146, they'll probably hit 146 with their right foot since the right arrow panel is closer to down than up is. But then after the trill during b146-147, they'll have to suddenly twist in a short amount of time to hit the LU jump at b148 facing the right way. It's not the WORST problem but at speeds as high as this, it does start to get annoying. That aside, the rhythm choices are alright, save for b304-320 (the 2nd and 3rd jumps should be a beat up and there should be an arrow at b316).
Heavy seemed like kind of a step down. There weren't any unavoidable doublesteps, but... Remember when I talked about ambiguous jump patterns? There's a shit ton of them across this chart, I get that some players think "you should play the chart more than one time to understand how it works" but in this case I find it really unfun and annoying. (b224-225 is an example of this.) Also, this chart felt kinda underwhelming; Some parts of the chart seemed generic compared to others (why is b144-156 all 4ths, for instance? and why is b304-336, simply put, anti-climactic).
Challenge... uh... yeah, you got carried away. I think the freeze forced doublesteps were way too demanding at this speed. Specifically, the patterning given. Look at b20-21. This constitutes a candle (trust me, this patterning takes more effort than a normal 8th jack or even b20.5 being a right arrow instead), and at 185 BPM it's more demanding than the 16th streams, save for the ones that end with jumps (which also seem like an annoying difficulty spike). In some cases, the freeze forced doublesteps cause you to face backwards anyway (b104-108 is a good example of this). Above all that, this whole chart seems unplanned. I'm not sure what you're following at all during b64-72, for instance, and I don't hear anything at all meriting the freezes during b96-128 (it seems like the choir, but you abandon it during parts like b102-104), and I'm not sure why you miss notes like b115, given the chart's nature.
Sorry to say it but this seems like a giant step down from your previous submissions.
Salt lake Lostman: Standard was a genuine step up from your previous submission. There are no unresolved crossovers/unnecessary doublesteps in the chart at all! I wouldn't start the chart with an up arrow, though. Also, the 0 jumps thing doesn't sit well with me, I feel like it faced left too much near the end, and some of the rhythm choices seem noticeable held back too. But as I said, it's an improvement over your other standard charts. (it could be a fluke though, but I say to roll with it, heh)
It's too bad it didn't carry over to the heavy chart. You were so close (b78 is the only one that can't be avoided) though. The ending would also make you face backwards but it can technically be avoided by footswitching.
But in all other fields... it's really, really bland. I get you were going for a 6 footer but... By the time I reach b218 I'm just waiting for the simfile to end. The jump count being a total of 1 (at a random spot) isn't helping either. I'll admit, song draw might be what hurt you the most. The song, simfiling wise, stops being interesting around b128. But it still has potential, and there's so many notes you overlooked (b27.5? b32.5, 33.5, 34.5? ... b245, 246, 247? 249?) and the patterning is plain. It's understandable with Standard but for this chart... it just ends up being dull and forgettable, I'm sorry.
Text Me: Kinda wish Standard had even a couple of crossovers, but otherwise a well-made chart. The gimmick at b258 was a nice touch.
Heavy was solid and really reminds me of a WIP simfile I plan on releasing someday; I like it a lot! The only thing that's off right off the bat is I think the mine at b44.5 should be moved down to b45 (same case with b208.5 -> 209).
THE ONE - English ver.: Interesting to set the BPM as 97.5 instead of 130. In any case, personally I think that b27-75 should've been slower than the rest of the file, whether it be 65, 48.75, doubling the BPM of the rest of the chart to 195, a bunch of combinations, it's up to you really.
Anyway, Standard was pretty good and I like how it gives you chances to avoid the spins with footswitches. Heavy sure was interesting with its patterning. Again, the same thing I said about Koi wa shiroobi, Sanshiro applies in that if its not marked, I crossover patterns such as an UR jump followed by a UL jump and most of the time I found myself facing backwards. And with the intense patterning all around, I don't think I want to face backwards for this chart. Actually, some of the 16th jacks such as b85.5 seem just there and I'm not sure what's in that part of the song that merits only a jack there and not parts like b86-86.25 and 86.5-86.75. Overall, though, it suits the song very nicely and I still enjoyed it.
The Whip (The Reef Remix): Nothing to complain about Standard, it's a good chart!
There were some missed notes in heavy, I'm very certain b23.5 and other similar flourishes (maybe you could've used rolls in those parts) could've been acknowledged for this chart, but the rest plays out quite good as well.
Challenge is well structured for the most part, but I can't say I'm a big fan of UDDUish footswitches at fast speeds. It gets a bit out of hand even for my standards in this chart. The rest is pretty good (in particular, the beginning).
ULTRA B+K: Standard got a little awkward to play sometimes, but that's the song's fault and I still enjoyed it.
Jesus, Heavy got incredibly intense at times. O__o;
I feel like there's something wrong with b64-80 and other similar parts. It's technically sound, it just seems a little bit overwhelming and awkward to play (maybe the 16th at b66.25 has something to do with it). There's some other things I probably would've done differently, but above all it's pretty well structured.
I don't think you made that many dumb choices with Koi wa shiroobi at all, Gameoson. :P
Totals:
Text Me [ROOK] - 9
The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr] - 5
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ] - 4
恋は白帯、サンシロー [Gameoson] - 4
THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279] - 4
Heathens [Nezemarth] - 2
Copacabana (At The Copa) [mf32892] - 1
ULTRA B+K [HealingDMax300] - 1
constellation [5l1n65h07] - 0
L'esprit [01angel] - 0
Salt lake Lostman [SupremeX] - 0
Post #417 · Posted at 2017-01-25 11:29:02am 7.2 years ago
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Veto, get me in.
Constellation - mediocre song, bad chart. Couldn't tell what a lot of these 16ths go to, there were weird breaks inbetween 8ths that don't make any sense considering the song continues the exact same... Probably a 0 for this one.
Copacabana - Oh man, did I really want to love this one. I mean, come on, the song's a classic. I don't really have much to say about the chart - aside from the fact that it feels slightly offsync, it's good yet unremarkable. +1
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY - The song made me think I wouldn't enjoy it, but... The song was actually pretty good? And the chart was fun too, providing a nice amount of challenge for your 9. Weird stuff. +2
Heathens - Oh, fuck me, I really did botch that sync job, didn't I? Anyway, 6.75/10, but bonus points for actually stepping one of my songs, fuck you if you get mad at this. +2
Koi wa shiroobi Sanshiro - Awesome. This'll probably be the best chart of the round. 16ths went perfectly, jumping was well utilized, reminds me a bit of my own Alien Girl chart. File of the round! +5
L'esprit - Honestly? ... I've played much worse. This wasn't GREAT and felt very "shit, i think I made a keyboard chart", 16th runs into jumps especially. Also, that intro was awkward as bollocks. But on the whole, i don't think this was awful. There probably was a more deserving file of the final point I had, but you honestly deserve some credit for this after all the shitting on you receive. Keep trying! Oh, and say hi to ALT for me. +1
Salt lake Lostman - Were you strapped for time or something? I don't even think this is a bloody 6. Very boring, lots of missed opportunities, whatever. Yes, there's nothing WRONG with it, but there's nothing RIGHT with it either. Leave making really basic charts on Hard to chewi, he knows how to do 'em.
Text Me - Another fantastic chart. Only complaint I really have is that the break in the middle of the song is too long and kind of kills the momentum but that's really an issue you can't solve so I won't hold it against you. +4
THE ONE - Oh, for fuck sake, not BABYMETAL... Siiiiiigh, here goes. Anyway, that karaoke stepping was the most unfun thing ever. Also, I don't get why you use so many crossovers here. Not the best, not the worst. Nice footswitch bit in there though.
The Whip - Despite it being a decent Expert chart, I just don't think footswitches should be literally the only thing you have going for your file. Also, those holds in the intro were fucking painful to pad.
ULTRA B+K - On the whole, not a bad effort. Chart's bouncy and energetic enough to fit the song and I think your patterns are pretty good. HM
Text Me [ROOK] - 13
恋は白帯、サンシロー [Gameoson] - 9
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ] - 6
The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr] - 5
Heathens [Nezemarth] - 4
THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279] - 4
Copacabana (At The Copa) [mf32892] - 2
L'esprit [01angel] - 1
ULTRA B+K [HealingDMax300] - 1
constellation [5l1n65h07] - 0
Salt lake Lostman [SupremeX] - 0
Constellation - mediocre song, bad chart. Couldn't tell what a lot of these 16ths go to, there were weird breaks inbetween 8ths that don't make any sense considering the song continues the exact same... Probably a 0 for this one.
Copacabana - Oh man, did I really want to love this one. I mean, come on, the song's a classic. I don't really have much to say about the chart - aside from the fact that it feels slightly offsync, it's good yet unremarkable. +1
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY - The song made me think I wouldn't enjoy it, but... The song was actually pretty good? And the chart was fun too, providing a nice amount of challenge for your 9. Weird stuff. +2
Heathens - Oh, fuck me, I really did botch that sync job, didn't I? Anyway, 6.75/10, but bonus points for actually stepping one of my songs, fuck you if you get mad at this. +2
Koi wa shiroobi Sanshiro - Awesome. This'll probably be the best chart of the round. 16ths went perfectly, jumping was well utilized, reminds me a bit of my own Alien Girl chart. File of the round! +5
L'esprit - Honestly? ... I've played much worse. This wasn't GREAT and felt very "shit, i think I made a keyboard chart", 16th runs into jumps especially. Also, that intro was awkward as bollocks. But on the whole, i don't think this was awful. There probably was a more deserving file of the final point I had, but you honestly deserve some credit for this after all the shitting on you receive. Keep trying! Oh, and say hi to ALT for me. +1
Salt lake Lostman - Were you strapped for time or something? I don't even think this is a bloody 6. Very boring, lots of missed opportunities, whatever. Yes, there's nothing WRONG with it, but there's nothing RIGHT with it either. Leave making really basic charts on Hard to chewi, he knows how to do 'em.
Text Me - Another fantastic chart. Only complaint I really have is that the break in the middle of the song is too long and kind of kills the momentum but that's really an issue you can't solve so I won't hold it against you. +4
THE ONE - Oh, for fuck sake, not BABYMETAL... Siiiiiigh, here goes. Anyway, that karaoke stepping was the most unfun thing ever. Also, I don't get why you use so many crossovers here. Not the best, not the worst. Nice footswitch bit in there though.
The Whip - Despite it being a decent Expert chart, I just don't think footswitches should be literally the only thing you have going for your file. Also, those holds in the intro were fucking painful to pad.
ULTRA B+K - On the whole, not a bad effort. Chart's bouncy and energetic enough to fit the song and I think your patterns are pretty good. HM
Text Me [ROOK] - 13
恋は白帯、サンシロー [Gameoson] - 9
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ] - 6
The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr] - 5
Heathens [Nezemarth] - 4
THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279] - 4
Copacabana (At The Copa) [mf32892] - 2
L'esprit [01angel] - 1
ULTRA B+K [HealingDMax300] - 1
constellation [5l1n65h07] - 0
Salt lake Lostman [SupremeX] - 0
Post #418 · Posted at 2017-01-25 07:54:56pm 7.2 years ago
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[Round F] gets an A from me. Favorite round to play through so far.
+3 Koi wa shiroobi (The long awaited return of Gameoson's true form)
+3 Text Me (Valedictorian of the Benpai school of EDM stepping, out of context I'd think he stepped this)
+2 THE ONE (We learn today that Babymetal does sound good in English. Above average)
+2 L’esprit (Yes, I really did like this chart this much. For the future, avoid 16th rhythms going into a jump)
+2 ULTRA B+K (It's a 10, but for a 10 it's very challenging. This reminds me of Pierce the Sky, if it was good)
+1 Copacabana (I feel like I'm underrating this, it's hard to accurately rate since I had attempted stepping this myself)
+1 The Whip (Couldn't play challenge, so I played expert. In the words of Wil-Dog, superrrrr average.)
+1 constellation (I would have vetoed this song. You did what you could, there's not much that can be done anyway)
HMs for the other two.
SupremeX, though you have no points so far this is tons better than Joujou Yuujou. Very much a Difficult chart, not Expert
Nezemarth, though not inherently a flawed chart, it could have done so much more with rhythmic variety
Text Me [ROOK] - 16
恋は白帯、サンシロー [Gameoson] - 12
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ] - 6
THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279] - 6
The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr] - 6
Heathens [Nezemarth] - 4
L'esprit [01angel] - 3
ULTRA B+K [HealingDMax300] - 3
Copacabana (At The Copa) [mf32892] - 3
constellation [5l1n65h07] - 1
Salt lake Lostman [SupremeX] - 0
+3 Koi wa shiroobi (The long awaited return of Gameoson's true form)
+3 Text Me (Valedictorian of the Benpai school of EDM stepping, out of context I'd think he stepped this)
+2 THE ONE (We learn today that Babymetal does sound good in English. Above average)
+2 L’esprit (Yes, I really did like this chart this much. For the future, avoid 16th rhythms going into a jump)
+2 ULTRA B+K (It's a 10, but for a 10 it's very challenging. This reminds me of Pierce the Sky, if it was good)
+1 Copacabana (I feel like I'm underrating this, it's hard to accurately rate since I had attempted stepping this myself)
+1 The Whip (Couldn't play challenge, so I played expert. In the words of Wil-Dog, superrrrr average.)
+1 constellation (I would have vetoed this song. You did what you could, there's not much that can be done anyway)
HMs for the other two.
SupremeX, though you have no points so far this is tons better than Joujou Yuujou. Very much a Difficult chart, not Expert
Nezemarth, though not inherently a flawed chart, it could have done so much more with rhythmic variety
Text Me [ROOK] - 16
恋は白帯、サンシロー [Gameoson] - 12
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ] - 6
THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279] - 6
The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr] - 6
Heathens [Nezemarth] - 4
L'esprit [01angel] - 3
ULTRA B+K [HealingDMax300] - 3
Copacabana (At The Copa) [mf32892] - 3
constellation [5l1n65h07] - 1
Salt lake Lostman [SupremeX] - 0
Post #419 · Posted at 2017-01-26 12:21:52am 7.2 years ago
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Not gonna lie, Uptown Fuck Funk (Metal Cover) is a cool song, but the charts aren't turning out as well as I thought they would, so I'll have to use a veto here (also, receiving 3 rock songs in a row is a little annoying, if not unlucky). I might continue working on it in the future, though.
APPEND: In the meantime, votes:
+5 恋は白帯、サンシロー
+4 FANTASTIC NxxD BABY
+3 Heathens
+2 constellation
+1 Copacabana (At The Copa)
+0 Salt lake Lostman
+0 ULTRA B+K
Totals:
恋は白帯、サンシロー [Gameoson] - 17
Text Me [ROOK] - 16
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ] - 10
Heathens [Nezemarth] - 7
THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279] - 6
The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr] - 6
Copacabana (At The Copa) [mf32892] - 4
constellation [5l1n65h07] - 3
L'esprit [01angel] - 3
ULTRA B+K [HealingDMax300] - 3
Salt lake Lostman [SupremeX] - 0
APPEND: In the meantime, votes:
+5 恋は白帯、サンシロー
+4 FANTASTIC NxxD BABY
+3 Heathens
+2 constellation
+1 Copacabana (At The Copa)
+0 Salt lake Lostman
+0 ULTRA B+K
Totals:
恋は白帯、サンシロー [Gameoson] - 17
Text Me [ROOK] - 16
FANTASTIC NxxD BABY [The Legendary DJXYZ] - 10
Heathens [Nezemarth] - 7
THE ONE - English ver. [ledgam3r1279] - 6
The Whip (Reef Remix) [Feraligatr] - 6
Copacabana (At The Copa) [mf32892] - 4
constellation [5l1n65h07] - 3
L'esprit [01angel] - 3
ULTRA B+K [HealingDMax300] - 3
Salt lake Lostman [SupremeX] - 0
Post #420 · Posted at 2017-01-26 06:13:18am 7.2 years ago
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