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Post #21 · Posted at 2016-09-18 05:24:41pm 7.5 years ago

Offline SZ64saulius
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Lithuania
Reg. 2016-09-10

"BIG SWANS!!!"

Last updated: 2016-09-18 05:27pm
Quote: Densetsu.EXE
Quote: 01angel
So, I FINALLY got a chance to use VocalWriter for something big~! Me and my buddy SZ64saulius collaborated on "Sweet Candy Party", an original happy hardcore track featuring the real voice of Alt! I wrote the lyrics and did the VocalWriter vocals, while SZ64saulius did the rest of the song. What do y'all think?

The balance between music and vocals needs addressing here:
(0:19-0:32) The piano kind of takes away from the ALT vocal; I suggest removing that entirely from this section but I'm not sure if this will improve it, try going for a balance between instruments and the vocal here.
(1:20 onwards) The vocals really begin to clash with the music here, but this is likely a sync problem, as the vocals start a little too early and stumble over the instrumental. I'm not sure if the vocal track is even the same BPM as the instrumental, as the vocal delivery seems too fast here.

Just a few things that stood out from the first listen. Music production takes a lot of practice and experimentation to get better, so keep producing. This goes double especially since it looks like you can actually do things with the ALT vocal, which might come in handy with later productions.

Hi, i'm the guy who made this song, i'm improving my music hard as i can but 1:20 part yea i accidently put vocals where it doesn't sync! The Piano is just your opinion!!! I can't fix it because it's already realesed Sad
also i'm not using FL Studio because it failed to install
so i need to use Soundation (making music) & Soundtrap (putting vocals)
why not on soundation to put vocals? you need to upgrade to pro to export the track with vocals

Post #22 · Posted at 2016-09-18 05:57:45pm 7.5 years ago

Offline Quickman
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Reg. 2013-08-17

"five minute white boy challenge"

Last updated: 2016-09-18 05:59pm
Not a fan of the ALT vocals in general, feel like they add hardly anything to the track, and the "SWEET CANDY PARTY!!" at 0:54 made me a cringe a little. And the "now everybody SING" bit sounds like you intentionally threw the SING off-key.
Quote: Quick Man
Approximately nobody asked for this song to be included. Least popular decision by the Japanese since Nintendo released the Wii U.
https://card.psnprofiles.com/1/DWN012Quick_Man.png

Post #23 · Posted at 2016-09-18 07:29:17pm 7.5 years ago

Offline darkanine
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United States
Reg. 2014-06-30

"bing bong"

Last updated: 2016-09-18 07:29pm
Quote: SZ64saulius
That'st fix it because it's already realesed
That's a horrible reason for not fixing it. Just fix what needs to be fixed, and then release the song again. No one will care; it's not like you are working for a record label or anything.
https://i.imgur.com/SSjqpre.png
--EDMix1 -Future Festival- Stage 3 of 6 Released!--
⤑[PROGRESSIVE HOUSE] Gravity / Blackcode & Feerty ft. Marina Lin
⤑[PROGRESSIVE TRANCE] Chromosphere / Farius
⤑[UPLIFTING TRANCE] Stars Collide (XiJaro & Pitch Remix) / Somna & Jennifer Rene
⤑[PROGRESSIVE PSYTRANCE] You Might Get Lost / Julian Calor
⤑[BIG ROOM HARDSTYLE] Wake Up Call (Extended) / Hardwell

Post #24 · Posted at 2016-09-19 09:15:40am 7.5 years ago

Offline 01angel
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Quote: Quickman
Not a fan of the ALT vocals in general, feel like they add hardly anything to the track, and the "SWEET CANDY PARTY!!" at 0:54 made me a cringe a little. And the "now everybody SING" bit sounds like you intentionally threw the SING off-key.

The "SING" was supposed to be "spoken", but it's kinda tough to get VocalWriter to "speak"...
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Post #25 · Posted at 2016-10-08 11:58:18am 7.5 years ago

Offline SZ64saulius
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"BIG SWANS!!!"
Sorry for a long reply,
I updating it and remastering it that "Sweet Candy Party"
It will be realesed once Damian LH will finish the remix of it!!!!!
Please, no saying that realese already or something like that Very Happy, i just want to update to an amazing single Big Grin

Post #26 · Posted at 2016-10-15 04:37:43am 7.5 years ago

Offline Sigrev2
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Nintendo Network ID: Sigrev2Nintendo Switch Friend Code: SW-2884-7660-37993DS Friend Code: 3883-7652-3160
"suffering from success"

Post #27 · Posted at 2016-11-06 01:06:55pm 7.4 years ago

Offline SZ64saulius
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Reg. 2016-09-10

"BIG SWANS!!!"

Last updated: 2016-11-09 06:09pm
An Old-School remix of Aqua (A.K.A the Barbie Girl Singer) Just made it for FUN!!! Big Grin

Soundcloud link:
https://soundcloud.com/sz64saulius/candyman-lollipopsz64-hardcore-mix

Hearthis.at link (if the Soundcloud link is deleted):
https://hearthis.at/sz64saulius/candyman-lollipopsz64-hardcore-mix/

Happycore Raver's Youtube Video link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mCrffO9uOOA&t=0s

Post #28 · Posted at 2016-11-08 03:05:12pm 7.4 years ago

Offline 01angel
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Reg. 2015-11-27

Game Center Nickname: 0/1 ANGEL
"Mostly just lurking."
https://soundcloud.com/the01angel/airportshuttle

Made the instrumental backing track from the original version of the song, and programmed Alt 2.0's voice to sing it using VocalWriter. (|[*'v'*]|)
Don't forget, I'm angel for yoooooooou(|[*'v'*]|)
~Eternal Ham World Order member~
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(●´∪`|♪。o.゚。*・Newest Simfile: Novi plan drugi san / Filip Baloš 。o.゚。*・♪|´∪`●)
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Post #29 · Posted at 2016-11-08 03:10:18pm 7.4 years ago

Offline Quickman
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Reg. 2013-08-17

"five minute white boy challenge"
https://soundcloud.com/quick-man/drivin-down-y95

A credits song for you.
Quote: Quick Man
Approximately nobody asked for this song to be included. Least popular decision by the Japanese since Nintendo released the Wii U.
https://card.psnprofiles.com/1/DWN012Quick_Man.png

Post #30 · Posted at 2016-11-09 07:07:41am 7.4 years ago

Offline Sigrev2
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Reg. 2009-10-17

Nintendo Network ID: Sigrev2Nintendo Switch Friend Code: SW-2884-7660-37993DS Friend Code: 3883-7652-3160
"suffering from success"
https://clyp.it/bc4r1q4i
in light of recent news, i give you all a bit of optimism and positivity

Post #31 · Posted at 2016-11-15 07:37:44am 7.4 years ago

Offline Elik-Digital
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United States
Reg. 2016-09-04

"Always working"
Hey all, so I'd like to share some music i've made using FL studio. I'd be happy to share the flp's with all who use the same daw.
My soundcloud here: https://soundcloud.com/elik-843559188/tracks

Here are the tracks individually if you don't want to click the link above with some information about each of them.

Hardcore Popcorn:https://soundcloud.com/elik-843559188/popcorn
This song is a more recent one where I had been messing around with hardcore melodies and trying out new things with a new plugin.

Do something about it: https://soundcloud.com/elik-843559188/do-something-about-it
This song I really like because I seemed to master it pretty well and it just turned out good. This was inspired by the excessive hardcore music I listen to.

Old School - Too Cool: https://soundcloud.com/elik-843559188/acid-old-school-too-cool
This song is particularly interesting because if you take a low pass filter over the entire track it sounds like you are standing outside of a club. Inspired by acid synths I messed around with a bass and got the result.

Asd: https://soundcloud.com/elik-843559188/dnb-asd-not-done
It says not done but it really is done, or at least i'm probably not going to touch it again. DnB inspired track, with an upbeat feel. There's a cool slow down at the end.

Let me know what you all think! Feedback is welcomed! Also looking to collaborate on a project? I'd be happy to, just PM me!

Post #32 · Posted at 2016-11-15 07:48:35pm 7.4 years ago

Offline Sigrev2
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"suffering from success"
so is anyone going to use this thread for its intended purpose or is everyone only gonna try to get free promo

Post #33 · Posted at 2016-11-15 07:49:15pm 7.4 years ago

Offline Quickman
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Reg. 2013-08-17

"five minute white boy challenge"
I'll let you come to the conclusion on that.
Quote: Quick Man
Approximately nobody asked for this song to be included. Least popular decision by the Japanese since Nintendo released the Wii U.
https://card.psnprofiles.com/1/DWN012Quick_Man.png

Post #34 · Posted at 2016-11-15 11:43:02pm 7.4 years ago

Offline 5l1n65h07
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Reg. 2012-07-03

"OH SHE'S UP TAE SPEED NOW BOIS"
Here I am again with another—possible—song for Z4U: https://soundcloud.com/5l1n65h07/jjo
5l1-STEP Series:
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Post #35 · Posted at 2016-11-22 02:38:29pm 7.4 years ago

Offline Densetsu.EXE
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"SOUND VOLTEX -BOOTH-"
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in light of recent news, i give you all a bit of optimism and positivity

Well I sense a good song in the making here. Would love to see this get an instrumental along the line.
https://i.imgur.com/1zjrrWb.png
Download here (mp3, 320kbps): (continuous mix) | (separate tracks)

Post #36 · Posted at 2016-11-23 06:55:21pm 7.4 years ago

Offline SZ64saulius
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Lithuania
Reg. 2016-09-10

"BIG SWANS!!!"

Last updated: 2016-11-23 06:56pm
Finally, after months, I finally re-realesed a track that needs to be fixed, It's Sweet Candy Party!
Also it features a remix by Damian LH! the download link is on Sodacore website and click download album to get the tracks Wink
Here's the sodacore and the download link: http://sauliusrandomness.wixsite.com/sodacore

What do you think this time? Green Grin

Post #37 · Posted at 2016-11-24 05:59:54pm 7.4 years ago

Offline Quickman
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Reg. 2013-08-17

"five minute white boy challenge"

Last updated: 2016-11-24 05:59pm
https://soundcloud.com/quick-man/sets/alone

This will have a new song every one week to two weeks. Hopefully.
Quote: Quick Man
Approximately nobody asked for this song to be included. Least popular decision by the Japanese since Nintendo released the Wii U.
https://card.psnprofiles.com/1/DWN012Quick_Man.png

Post #38 · Posted at 2016-12-28 04:54:23pm 7.3 years ago

Offline 01angel
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Game Center Nickname: 0/1 ANGEL
"Mostly just lurking."

Last updated: 2016-12-28 04:54pm
Ladies and gentlemen! I am proud to announce that I have made my first-ever AquesTone song, and my first-ever track where the instrumentation is done 100% by me! It's a remix of "Invisible Lover" from Pop'n Music.

Give it a listen here: https://soundcloud.com/the01angel/invisiblelover
Don't forget, I'm angel for yoooooooou(|[*'v'*]|)
~Eternal Ham World Order member~
http://i.imgur.com/2YKgcAX.png
(●´∪`|♪。o.゚。*・Newest Simfile: Novi plan drugi san / Filip Baloš 。o.゚。*・♪|´∪`●)
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Post #39 · Posted at 2017-02-01 09:15:40pm 7.2 years ago

Offline midone
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Quote: Quickman
https://soundcloud.com/quick-man/sets/alone

This will have a new song every one week to two weeks. Hopefully.

I'm a big fan of the "return to apollo" track, it's really nice and energetic sounding!

Post #40 · Posted at 2017-02-10 08:20:33pm 7.1 years ago

Offline Quickman
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United Kingdom
Reg. 2013-08-17

"five minute white boy challenge"
https://soundcloud.com/quick-man/always-leaving-me-to-die

A new piece fairly inspired by the soft parts of To Live Is To Die by Metallica. Check it out if you'd like.
Quote: Quick Man
Approximately nobody asked for this song to be included. Least popular decision by the Japanese since Nintendo released the Wii U.
https://card.psnprofiles.com/1/DWN012Quick_Man.png
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