Post #121 · Posted at 2021-06-18 08:46:47pm 2.8 years ago
Round 1 file feedback
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/14KKT8BU7goEzl_MkKv2mfnhwmcygIFci1Yp-A3_B4cc/edit?usp=sharing
Please note:
- Those marked in yellow, I highly recommend these files to new steppers and those that might get low scores as a guide in charting for future songs.
- Do NOT be discouraged by the negative feedback/low scores (especially to those new to contests); that means that there is A LOT of room to improve. Just keep stepping, perhaps consider the feedback we give, refer to the files I marked in yellow and some DDR/ITG official files and then come up with your own ideas later on.
- My reviews obviously will not reflect where your file will stand overall. There are nearly 50 other participants that may have entirely different views as mine.
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/14KKT8BU7goEzl_MkKv2mfnhwmcygIFci1Yp-A3_B4cc/edit?usp=sharing
Please note:
- Those marked in yellow, I highly recommend these files to new steppers and those that might get low scores as a guide in charting for future songs.
- Do NOT be discouraged by the negative feedback/low scores (especially to those new to contests); that means that there is A LOT of room to improve. Just keep stepping, perhaps consider the feedback we give, refer to the files I marked in yellow and some DDR/ITG official files and then come up with your own ideas later on.
- My reviews obviously will not reflect where your file will stand overall. There are nearly 50 other participants that may have entirely different views as mine.
Post #122 · Posted at 2021-06-18 09:59:31pm 2.8 years ago
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Quote: MAGICAL SUMMER SMILE review
It's okay; the intro was too overcharted and felt too karaoke.
Not sure I agree with being overcharted, but... yeah I couldn't think of anything else to do with that intro other than karaoke. I didn't know a good way to step the piano without either A: going totally overboard or B: toning down the rhythms in a way that still felt "correct".
So... I actually have reviews of my own that I wrote for this week. Yeah, I actually wrote reviews for all the files for once. But now I'm not sure if I should actually post them. I want to but I'm also afraid of coming off as a bit of an ass in some of my comments.
Post #123 · Posted at 2021-06-19 06:14:51am 2.8 years ago
Post #124 · Posted at 2021-06-19 10:56:02am 2.8 years ago
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I'm not going to be able to submit something this week, unfortunately. But if anyone wants feedback on their simfiles from Week 1 or Week 2, please PM me.
Post #125 · Posted at 2021-06-19 02:43:57pm 2.8 years ago
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Quote: Gameoson
So... I actually have reviews of my own that I wrote for this week. Yeah, I actually wrote reviews for all the files for once. But now I'm not sure if I should actually post them. I want to but I'm also afraid of coming off as a bit of an ass in some of my comments.
I'd say you should post them. And if anyone accuses you of being an ass then that's their problem, it's just your opinion.Post #126 · Posted at 2021-06-19 03:08:51pm 2.8 years ago
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Glad I can find something to step for this week because apparently I can't find songs for Week 1.
So yea, starting off with mild stuff.
So yea, starting off with mild stuff.
Post #127 · Posted at 2021-06-19 03:16:48pm 2.8 years ago
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Quote: Gameoson
So... I actually have reviews of my own that I wrote for this week. Yeah, I actually wrote reviews for all the files for once. But now I'm not sure if I should actually post them. I want to but I'm also afraid of coming off as a bit of an ass in some of my comments.
Roast us! Self-bias is implicit, so getting called out by others is the best way to learn what we're doing wrong and improve our future charts.
Post #128 · Posted at 2021-06-19 03:26:35pm 2.8 years ago
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Quote: Gameoson
Quote: MAGICAL SUMMER SMILE review
It's okay; the intro was too overcharted and felt too karaoke.
Not sure I agree with being overcharted, but... yeah I couldn't think of anything else to do with that intro other than karaoke. I didn't know a good way to step the piano without either A: going totally overboard or B: toning down the rhythms in a way that still felt "correct".
For anyone that hasn't played this file yet I'll put this in spoiler tags like I do with my feedback in Discord so no one feels a bit biased when playing this.
That's definitely how it felt like when playing it but the intro for sure can definitely be toned down IMO and you could still afford to follow other parts of the song like the percussions in say the section in m58 which felt similar to m49 though I understand what the current ESP is going for. Pretty much subjective anyway.
Quote: Gameoson
So... I actually have reviews of my own that I wrote for this week. Yeah, I actually wrote reviews for all the files for once. But now I'm not sure if I should actually post them. I want to but I'm also afraid of coming off as a bit of an ass in some of my comments.
By all means please do. Reviews (maybe regardless of harshness as long as constructive of course) will definitely help improve other steppers and it would be nice to see perspectives other than mine and/or tak's in ZIv contests for once.
Post #129 · Posted at 2021-06-19 07:09:46pm 2.8 years ago
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[Olympic Rings]
Everything Black - Unlike Pluto (feat. Mike Taylor)
https://zenius-i-vanisher.com/v5.2/viewsimfile.php?simfileid=46233
2 / 4 / 7 / 11
Everything Black - Unlike Pluto (feat. Mike Taylor)
https://zenius-i-vanisher.com/v5.2/viewsimfile.php?simfileid=46233
2 / 4 / 7 / 11
This is my first time joining the summer contest. I had an experiment with this chart using mines. I hope it isn't too confusing!
Post #131 · Posted at 2021-06-19 08:02:23pm 2.8 years ago
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oh my god i cant believe hes getting political in a ziv competition
Post #132 · Posted at 2021-06-19 09:10:35pm 2.8 years ago
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Ok I was not planning to join, but as long as I don't have to join in on every round, and don't have to vote on rounds I am have not made a file in,
Is it still possible to join? I all ready have a file for round 2.
Is it still possible to join? I all ready have a file for round 2.
Post #133 · Posted at 2021-06-19 10:46:05pm 2.8 years ago
Post #134 · Posted at 2021-06-20 07:42:55am 2.8 years ago
Quote: Gameoson's Feedback
I couldn’t really figure out what you were trying to do during the chorus. Some of the 16ths seem like they’re just randomly thrown in there.
The 16ths in the chorus are actually charted to the drums
However, it's not really obvious
Blue Forest(NightBounce Remix) / kanone
from SOUND VOLTEX EXCEED GEAR
15
this time, i added shock arrows
not a lot of them, but they are there
Post #135 · Posted at 2021-06-20 08:39:37am 2.8 years ago
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GREEN EYES/SLAKE
: 4 : 8 : 11 : 15 : 17
: 4 : 8 : 11 : 15 : 17
Post #136 · Posted at 2021-06-20 03:12:56pm 2.8 years ago
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I've made some adjustments to Green Green Dance, so please redownload it if you have the original version. Thanks!
Post #137 · Posted at 2021-06-20 03:31:53pm 2.8 years ago
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I thought I was doing Green a favor halfway through the week, but now it got solid representation after all...ah well. Maybe next time, Yellow.
From the rhythm game Cytus.
In my continuing saga of having no idea how to rate certain on-the-fence charts, consider this to be in the hard-14/decent-15 range.
From the rhythm game Cytus.
In my continuing saga of having no idea how to rate certain on-the-fence charts, consider this to be in the hard-14/decent-15 range.
Post #138 · Posted at 2021-06-20 04:04:51pm 2.8 years ago
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Quote: Lampshade
Quote: Gameoson's Feedback
I couldn’t really figure out what you were trying to do during the chorus. Some of the 16ths seem like they’re just randomly thrown in there.
The 16ths in the chorus are actually charted to the drums
However, it's not really obvious
*diagram*
Okay, I hear it now, you're right. Thanks for pointing that out! In that case, though, I think a 5-note 16th cluster would have made a little more sense than just 3 notes, just like it is in that GITADORA chart you referenced.
Post #139 · Posted at 2021-06-20 04:47:05pm 2.8 years ago
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Post #140 · Posted at 2021-06-20 05:04:12pm 2.8 years ago
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Black Or White / Dreamcatcher
6 / 9 / 13 // D- 12
BPM: 100* (some minute BPM tweaks exist to keep things in sync)
If you have already downloaded it and want the official album jacket/generic graphics, you can re-download. I just added the jacket in a couple minutes before the deadline.
(and yes everything was uploaded before the deadline)